Correct the error of faulty parallelism in the following sentence.

The hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and to start after 10:00 a.m. would not be wise.

Answer:

"to start after 10:00 a.m. would not be wise" is the incorrect part so the correct way to write is "The hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and that it will not be wise to start after 10:00 a.m"

Explanation:

The sentence that begins, "to commence after 10:00 a.m. would not be wise" should read "The hikers understood that the hike was six miles, that it often took the entire day, and that it will not be wise to start after 10:00 a.m."

A parallel's position or relationship. agreement in direction, tendency, or character; parallelism as a state or condition. a comparison or parallel.

The repeating of grammatical elements in a text to produce a pleasing effect is known as parallelism. The exact same words are sometimes repeated, as in the sayings "easy come, easy go" and "veni, vidi, vici" ("I came, I saw, I conquered").

Using phrases, sentences, and paragraphs that balance one element with another of equal importance and similar language, parallelism is a rhetorical device that can be used in both prose and poetry.

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