To improve the logic and flow of the essay, the writer should revise sentence 5 by replacing the word "money" with the word "dough. " deleting the sentence to clarify the overall argument. Inserting the phrase "are awesomely fast" after "tablets" to add personality. Adding the transition "however" at the beginning to connect the ideas better

The writer should revise sentence 5 and add the phrase "however" at the beginning to better connect the ideas, as shown in the last answer option.

The use of transitional words is essential for the good development of the text, as they promote fluidity, connection, and the text's efficiency in conveying a message.

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Answer:

D. adding the transition “however” at the beginning to connect the ideas better.

Explanation:

c'mon keep it simple I did not come to brainly to learn I come to get my stuff done quick if I cared I would do the work myself just do the answer up top like so then do your big boy words in the bottom part the guy above me didn't do that bad he actually said the last one which helps but I prefer just the answer lol

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After the massive fire broke out, the local news station interviewed Bubbles the
Depressing Clown about the cause of the fire. He felt that, in his professional opinion, a
faulty breaker on the fuse box may have created a chain reaction thatoverloaded the
circuits.
A) Straw Man
B) Ad Hominem
C) Bandwagon
D) Appeal to Authority
E) Post Hoc
F) Red Herring

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a person who fixes something
a person who performs something
a person who builds something
a person who teaches something

5 The comparison drawn in lines 50 through 53
expresses the Grandmother's
(1) awareness of varying experiences of city life
(2) contempt for the residents of the city
(3) frustration with the inconvenience of city life
(4)) inability to accept the beauty of the city

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How has this incident made all the boys realize how much they need each other, and how much they need Johnny

What’s the main idea

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Based on this evidence, what can you conclude about the ball and the hoop?

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give
understand
answer
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someone please
Match the lines from the poems to the meter used.


anapestic tetrameter

iambic tetrameter

iambic pentameter


Murmuring how she loved me — she

Too weak, for all her heart's endeavor,

To set its struggling passion free

From pride, and vainer ties dissever,

And give herself to me forever.

(excerpt from “Porphyria’s Lover” by Robert Browning)


Quite clear to such an one, and say, “Just this

Or that in you disgusts me; here you miss,

Or there exceed the mark”—and if she let

Herself be lessoned so, nor plainly set

(excerpt from “My Last Duchess” by Robert Browning)


For only last night, as they whispered, I brought

My own eyes to bear on her so, that I thought

Could I keep them one half minute fixed, she would fall

Shrivelled; she fell not; yet this does it all!

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1.
Which sentence best describes how the people in the cottage react to Fletcher?
They are bored by his conversation.
They are openly hostile toward him.
They grudgingly tolerate his presence.
They feel sorry for him now that he's old.
2.
Fletcher's defense of his past actions is that
his ideas were always correct
he never tried to influence anyone
he had suffered from mental illness
he was right to inspire others to act
3.
most likely saw Fletcher as
As a young teenager, Roger Button
a coward
a tormentor
an inspiration
a companion
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Identify the type of Internet writing most appropriate for this passage. Analyze the
passage in terms of purpose, content, and tone, and explain how these contribute to
your understanding of what type of writing it is.
Passage
I'd like to add my voice to those upset about Fantasy Voyage /l. The original
Fantasy Voyage was one of the best role-playing video games of all time, and
it wasn't because of the realistic graphics or innovative use of social media
it was the writing, the narrative that rolled out like a red carpet'across the misty
landscapes of Vladaros. Playing that game provided a deeper understanding
of Queen Elmglot and her noble companions as they braved the mysterious
Orc Cloud then scurried along the Spikey Ridge before facing betrayal on
Quagmire Mountain. Their motivations and conflicts were so well drawn that
they felt like family, and that made the adventure so much more rich and vivid.
But still, to the writers' credit, the game was full of surprises. Fantasy Voyage
II
, on the other hand, is written with such lack of imagination it's like going
grocery shopping with your grandmother. It's safe and lacks any surprises. You
pretty much know how it's going to turn out. Is it just me, or does anyone else
think the writing for FVII is a failure?

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Read the passage from My Antonia by Willa Cather?

Those girls had grown up in the first bitter-hard

times, and had got little schooling themselves. But

the younger brothers and sisters, for whom they

made such sacrifices and who have had

"advantages," never seem to me, when I meet them

now, half as interesting or as well educated. The older

girls, who helped to break up the wild sod, learned so

much from life, from poverty, from their mothers and

grandmothers; they had all, like Antonia, been early

awakened and made observant by coming at a tender

age from an old country to a new.


Which theme is best supported by the contrast in this

passage?


A. It is better for girls to be farmers than teachers.

B. Experience can be a more effective teacher than

formal education.

C. It isn't a good idea to make sacrifices for your family.

D. People who have advantages aren't very interesting.

Which sentence combines these two
sentences using a coordinating
conjunction?
Our English teacher can't be surpassed.
Her love of literature is very inspiring.
*Remember FANBOYS
A. Our English teacher can't
be surpassed; therefore, her
love of literature is very inspiring.
B. Our English teacher can't
be surpassed because her love
of literature is very inspiring.
C.
Our English teacher can't be surpassed, and her love
literature is very inspiring.
of

Sweet is to bitter as conscious to____

A.clear

B.unaware

C.salty

D.sour

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What color rhymes with WARD